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Benny Khaos [producer]

Started by B Steady, January 28, 2013, 08:38:25 PM

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B Steady

Hey guys!

I'm also producing music by myself. This is my latest production. Hope you like it! :)

http://www.soundcloud.com/bsteady/determined
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B Steady

Not yet in there but I left some room for female vocals :) (which I am searching for!)
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Joshua

Just had a listen to several tracks, and you've got some awesome creativity going on. Some really nice dark Timbaland vibe stuff, and the couple of dance tracks I liked too. I think if you could expand on it a bit and really build it up in places, "Danger" could have genuinely huge potential for an r&b/rap artist. Actually I think most tracks had brilliant parts, just that some needed to be changed up a bit so they don't get too samey all the way through. Definitely keep it up! :)

B Steady

Quote from: Joshua on January 29, 2013, 01:24:00 PM
Just had a listen to several tracks, and you've got some awesome creativity going on. Some really nice dark Timbaland vibe stuff, and the couple of dance tracks I liked too. I think if you could expand on it a bit and really build it up in places, "Danger" could have genuinely huge potential for an r&b/rap artist. Actually I think most tracks had brilliant parts, just that some needed to be changed up a bit so they don't get too samey all the way through. Definitely keep it up! :)

thank you very much!!! I'm really pleased :)
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Rebecca

I liked your track, it sounded good. Looking forward to hearing it with some vocals. well done.

B Steady

This evening I'll upload a new instrumental with a few Cheiron influences :)
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B Steady

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Joshua

That's a whole lotta kick drum! ;D I quite like it for all it's old school magic... do you have a melody for it yet? Would be great with some strong, thick Backstreet style harmonies.

B Steady

Quote from: Joshua on February 26, 2013, 01:53:10 PM
That's a whole lotta kick drum! ;D I quite like it for all it's old school magic... do you have a melody for it yet? Would be great with some strong, thick Backstreet style harmonies.

Actually only two kick drums but yeah, it's fat! :) thank you!! :) Until now I'm not writing lyrics or thinking of vocal melodies. But this will come :)
Yes, the instrumental already sounds bit like 1999/2000 Backstreet Boys doesn't it?
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Axel

hey B-Steady!

Good solid groundwork. Soooo tempting to write a melody for it! :-))

keep up to the good work and keep finetuning. Also add some variations in the 2nd verse or 2nd chorus. There must be a new element each time to add some new audio.

I really like both of the links you posted. Great potential in my opinion!

Axel

one question though: For determined, are you aware that the chords in the chorus are the same as in "Love the way you lie" (a song I truly adore, the melody is pure bliss) by Eminem & Rihanna? I was whistling the melody of the song to your chorus and it fits right in. Maybe a slight variation could help a lot with one of these chords. Then again, Eminem & Rihanna certainly weren't the first to have this chord progression either. :)

B Steady

Wow, thank you for that feedback!!! I really appreciate it ! :)

it's not only LTWYL, I mean there are so many songs with this progression - it's like the default progression in pop music haha! :)
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B Steady

btw my latest production for you guys:

https://soundcloud.com/bsteady/better

this time it's dance-pop :)
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Axel

hi B Steady! (or Servus nach Augsburg for that matter (ich wohne in Basel).  :-)

I think your stuff is good from the ideas and concepts, even the chords are fine. I think the only area you need to work on (and I saw you've made huge progress since 2010 (I've gone through all of your tracks on Soundcloud)), is the modernity of your samples/VSTi's. Your mix is not up to par with what's out there either, but neither is mine, but that's an area that takes a long learning-curve and you're already making a lot of progress in that area as well. But I think it would take your tracks to a whole new level if you had one or two great sample-packs for drums and a nice VSTi. What are you currently using equipmentwise? If you manage to make your songs sound less "dated" at least from the selection of sounds, it would give your material a massive boost.

heck, maybe other users disagree with my view, but I just thought I'd share my opinion.