"Parachute" new song written by me

[Dominik]

Hey guys,

i just wrote and produced a new track called
"parachute". this time I tried my luck with
rock. check it out:

http://soundcloud.com/flofo/parachute

i would appreciate if you tell me what you
think.

best,

dominik

[maxmartin'sfan]

great song!

[Dominik]

i samples a short part of "till the world ends" by the way...
guess were??

[georg_e]

            Totally excellent song!!   Great melody, and I love that substitute chord (ii minor) you put at beginning of last phrase of chorus --has an emotional impact.   Can't hear "Til The world Ends" sample yet though :-)

[Raul_esp]

Great song , But I can't hear the sample either.

[Crane]

Compression effects especially to cymbals too much! Otherwise very nice, even rock isn't my thing exactly

E: Till The World Ends at 1:35?

[Dominik]

Hey all,


thanks to the critics. @crane not an engineer at all. just
tried to get the best out of the mix i can. youre right with the
sample.

take care

[Rebecca]

yeah, excellent song, very catchy. I still can't hear the sample, even now I know where it is!

[awonip]

My fave song on here!

Wow, you're really good! 2 thumbs up!