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Offline 1stSauce

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Feedback for "Don't Hold Me Back"
« on: February 14, 2017, 04:06:04 PM »
My new song. Still a little rough around the edges though and I've had a slight headcold over the weekend.
https://soundcloud.com/tim-brooks-28/its-a-lovely-day-master-1-rough-vocal-version

Verse 1:
Disappointment and hurt
Certainty and trust seemed absurd
Trapped in the past I couldn't move on
But I see the light again
It's been dark too long

Bridge:
Tormented, Abused - Mistreated and used
I'm about to attack so don't hold me back
The sun's shining bright - chasing away the night
I'm on the right track so don't hold me back

Chorus
It's a lovely day - Whaddya say??
I wanna take a walk outside today
Whoa oh!! Ooh whoa oh!
Been waiting all winter for the sun to shine
Don't hold me back 'cos the light is mine
Ooh whoa oh!! Ooh whoa oh!!

Verse 2:
I'd forgotten that I had a choice
I let you push me past the breaking point
I found a love that I thought I'd lost
It was gone for too long

Bridge
Tormented, Abused - Mistreated and used
I'm about to attack so don't hold me back
The sun's shining bright - chasing away the night
I'm on the right track so don't hold me back

Chorus:
It's a lovely day - Whaddya say??
I wanna take a walk outside today
Whoa oh!! Ooh whoa oh!
Been waiting all winter for the sun to shine
Don't hold me back 'cos the light is mine
Ooh whoa oh!! Ooh whoa oh!!

Bridge:
Whoa ho ho
Whoa whoa-oh-oh
Whoa whoa whoa-oh-oh
Whoa whoa-oh-oh
Don't hold me back!!
Whoa ho ho
Whoa whoa-oh-oh
Whoa whoa whoa-oh-oh
Whoa whoa-oh-oh
Don't hold me back!!