New Song - Collaboration?

[j.fco.morales]

Hey guys,
I just put together this demo of a poppy, feel-good tune. I used the famous Cheiron glockenspiel for some melody that could back up vocals.
Please give me some suggestions, and I would even ask any singers out there to collaborate since I can't really sing lol

https://soundcloud.com/zjames/ocean-view-1

What kind of thing you think it would suit better? a pop thing or a more alternative sound?

[ZachJames]

Well I've always wanted to make a killer pop song! But I think improvising and doing what you think sounds good and pleases your ears is cool too. This isn't being used for anything, just a fun thing!

[melodicmoonlight]

RedOne does the xylophone-like melodic effect in his songs. the Jlo songs, the ones with Nicki, and now this new song he did with Porcelain Black, "Rich Boi"

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dExvbOJyPRA&feature=player_embedded#at=36

[Raul_esp]

RedOne does the xylophone-like melodic effect in his songs. the Jlo songs, the ones with Nicki, and now this new song he did with Porcelain Black, "Rich Boi"

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dExvbOJyPRA&feature=player_embedded#at=36

Wow , Great song , Although the intro of the song reminds me to ''The joker'' of Steve Miller band.