...In The Style of Tove Lo and Sia...

[ferropop]

Hi!  Just discovered this forum today.  I am a tremendous proponent of melodic fragment recycling, syllabic-lyrics, and all these other pop-writing techniques perfected by the Swedes...so this forum feels like a warm comfortable pillow that I feel so lucky to have found!

My latest production:

https://soundcloud.com/ferro4prez/ferro-come-a-little-bit-closer-ft-brooke-palsson

Your feedback is incredibly appreciated!

-Ferro-

[ferropop]

Anything is appreciated

[ferropop]

Not looking for a pat on the back, I want my tracks to be as tight as possible and want to hear what people really think!  Thanks so much, respect from Canada!

[j.fco.morales]

Sounds good, but it's too inspired on Chandelier to me.

Try a different arrangement, the similarities are way too close.

[AdamKhan]

Really good chorus there buddy !!

i would re-work the verses a little (production)

[ferropop]

Thanks!  Yeah in the verses I have a lot of orchestral elements happening that need to be lifted in the mix to compete with the synths, I just feel like I'm committing a sin when being heavy-handed with eq/compression on orchestration lol.  Thanks for the comments, I'd be interested what you think about the other one I posted (same forum, titled That Swedish Pop Magic).

=Ferro=