Better than a new Max Song!

[thestarmaps]

Check this out - it's from a new pop songwriter in Brooklyn:

http://www.superiortracks.com/Someone_to_See.mp3

I think this could be a great single with the right female vocalist - what do you think?!?

Big and seriously catchy!!

[Rebecca]

Welcome thestarmaps

I've had a few of listens to the song, I think it's pretty good song, though it's not poppy enough for me and is a little repetitive. The singing is okay, so your suggestion of the right female singer could really make the difference!

Did you write this song starmaps?

[*Sabine*]

Not really my style, as Reb said, not poppy enough? I dunno if you wrote it but you should make it more catchy and less repetitive...

[maxmartin'sfan]

very bad..

[thestarmaps]

Thanks for the replies (except for the "very bad" one - ouch!) . . . yes, I wrote this song.  I'm a big Max fan (only found this Website recently), and I'm trying to write songs at his level of catchiness.  I'm going to be working with a female vocalist on this song, and I think that will help.

I'll repost once I think I have a better version ready - thanks for listening!!

Also, I predict that Max will probably work with neon hitch (look her up on myspace) in the next few months.

Derick/NYC

[maxmartin'sfan]

ahaha sorry  ! I thought u was just here for one post, just to show your song "better than a new max song"  which is not better than a new max song lool
I was mad!

I hope a better version ! but stop the " better than a max song " 

[thestarmaps]

Oh, no problem - yes, it was a cheeky title - and the wrong place to write with with so many Max fans here!!!

As a Max fan myself, I totally understand.

In another note, I saw Britney here at MSG on the 25th, and while the Max songs sounded great, of course, it was a bummer that she only actually sang one song. . . though I guess that's to be expected.

My favorite song from the new Britney album is "Unusual You"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nqhsIESV_jc

[Rebecca]

I absolutely love "Unusual You" too, glad you enjoyed Britney's concert even though she only sings one song.

That's great that Max is an inspiration for your songwriting Derick, I hope your songs work out for you.

Thanks for the tip re Neon Hitch, I'll keep an eye out.

[Poptasticuk]

I'm a huge fan of Neon Hitch, so I hope you're right that she'll work with Max! What is your source for this info? I think she could be really successful, even if she doesn't work with Max.

[thestarmaps]

Here's a new/better pop track, that I wrote to pitch for Vita's new album:

http://www.myspace.com/thestarmaps

You can check Vita's stuff out here: http://www.myspace.com/vita

[Rebecca]

wow, I really like Talk To Me, I'm really impressed actually. I like it much better than your first song. I really like your vocals on it too. Good luck with Vita though.

[Feelgoodlies]

Here's a new/better pop track, that I wrote to pitch for Vita's new album:

http://www.myspace.com/thestarmaps

You can check Vita's stuff out here: http://www.myspace.com/vita

The chours of this song isn't strong to make it stand out actually. To follow the steps of Max, you need to have a so damn catchy chorus. Basiclly the chorus defines the song for almost everyone of us, so my suggestion is to work better on choruses, you know make'em uptempo, angry I don't know hmmm catchy!

Good luck!

[thestarmaps]

Thanks, Rebecca and Feelgoodlies!  I'll let you know if anything happens with this track.