My First Pop Demo - "Had Me One Time" Any good?

[nznexus]

But you don't even recognize when the vocal track doesn't match your instrumental, so I don't know nznexus...

wrong

[B Steady]

wrong

Well I didn't want to talk about this again but now that I'm reading this .... So you recognized it's off beat but you let well enough alone?

[georg_e]

Feedback it's hurtful, isn't it?

Sometimes it can be hysterical though :-)   I did a focus group once and somebody wrote: "This is the worst song I've ever heard in my entire life, and I'm being nice"

[JJ-13]

Good song! Don't like the production at all!
I would produce it differently, but thats taste

[Rex]

The melodies are pretty sticky, great job! but i can hear no difference between the verses and the chorus... And the production, well, it could be better