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New production of mine.

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Offline 1stSauce

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New production of mine.
« on: February 21, 2017, 12:09:58 PM »
Here's my new track. Let me know what you think!!!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fOaRivSr7Aw&t=29s

Offline Phantom9d

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Re: New production of mine.
« Reply #1 on: March 27, 2017, 08:22:05 AM »
Hey!

For some constructive critique: Maybe use some additional pads/chords or rhytms in the background of the vers to create a bit more tension and interest.

When the pre chorus kicks in. Maybe introduce some other element of sound to create tension before the chorus. It gets sort of a bit to repetetive to have the tropical bell throughout everything besides the chorus. And a chord change would be cool in the bridge to create some change.

Velocity is important to make something feel more natural. Maybe change the velocity on some of the notes so it doesn't sound so "flat" and robotic unless thats what you're going for.

Volume/filter automation is also something you could use on certain parts of the song to make it more interesting.

I would also try to challange the vocal melody a bit more and to change it up on certain parts so it doens't sound so much the same. Less is more :)

Just keep on writing songs and listen to tons of music that motivates you! Try to copy some styles that you like so you can practice the basics and find cool sound sources/samples that inspires you.

Keep up the good work man!