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My unfinished ideas

Started by J_A24, February 20, 2014, 04:49:52 PM

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Axel

#1
February 20, 2014, 05:39:31 PM
sounds great. The only thing I don't like is this whirly synth that still keeps going while you throw in the lovely chords in the front. The rest is bliss. Immediately makes me whistle melodies.. I love the drums in the last part too.

J_A24

#2
February 20, 2014, 06:12:03 PM
Thanks and I agree, I'm re-making that track and taking off that synth completely. I initially wanted to make a trap beat, but it kinda went in another direction lol.

AdamKhan

#4
February 20, 2014, 10:55:56 PM
Your ideas are dope! 2nd one is fire.

Do you songwrite aswell?

J_A24

#5
February 21, 2014, 01:31:22 AM
Quote from: AdamKhan on February 20, 2014, 10:55:56 PM
Your ideas are dope! 2nd one is fire.

Do you songwrite aswell?

I come up with melodies, I love co-writing.

nznexus

#6
February 21, 2014, 01:45:41 AM Last Edit: February 21, 2014, 01:58:54 AM by nznexus
sounds horrible. im sorry but.. you need more experience you need to work on your mixing more

altho ... this is not really my style of music. overuse of 808s. ...

listen to some real music instead http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UyQlHYb7g3w
music producer nexus is running a channel called the ellie goulding resource. only the best ellie goulding news, photos, interviews, photoshoots.

J_A24

#7
February 21, 2014, 01:59:43 AM
Quote from: nznexus on February 21, 2014, 01:45:41 AM
sounds horrible. im sorry but.. you need more experience you need to work on your mixing more

altho ... this is not really my style of music. overuse of 808s. ...

listen to some real music instead http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UyQlHYb7g3w

That's fire right there, we are not worthy.

All hail king nznexus.

nznexus

#8
February 21, 2014, 02:10:04 AM
Quote from: J_A24 on February 21, 2014, 01:59:43 AM
That's fire right there, we are not worthy.

All hail king nznexus.

Damn right!

I've got a better chance of being worthy than you

lol
music producer nexus is running a channel called the ellie goulding resource. only the best ellie goulding news, photos, interviews, photoshoots.

J_A24

#9
February 21, 2014, 02:13:00 AM
Quote from: nznexus on February 21, 2014, 02:10:04 AM


Damn right!

I've got a better chance of being worthy than you

lol

I don't rely on chance, buddy. Keep trying :)

nznexus

#10
February 21, 2014, 02:17:19 AM
Quote from: J_A24 on February 21, 2014, 02:13:00 AM
I don't rely on chance, buddy. Keep trying :)

That was my line.  ;D
music producer nexus is running a channel called the ellie goulding resource. only the best ellie goulding news, photos, interviews, photoshoots.

AdamKhan

#11
February 21, 2014, 10:09:28 PM
Nexus very jealous of your work.

nznexus

#12
February 21, 2014, 10:28:03 PM
Awesome, I like your music
music producer nexus is running a channel called the ellie goulding resource. only the best ellie goulding news, photos, interviews, photoshoots.

J_A24

#13
February 22, 2014, 12:13:21 AM
Thanks guys, I'll post more stuff with time. Maybe a couple of demos with hummed melodies :)

B Steady

#14
February 22, 2014, 12:28:27 AM
your sound design game is on top but I don't like most of the progressions / melodies. they're not bad but I would change them a bit. matter of taste :)

keep up the fantastic work!!
Vila i frid Dag
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