Hey Guys
As Max and the disciples influence me so, so much and they influence all you guys, I really value your opinion. So I'd love to know what you think of my 2nd single :D :D :D
Let me know what you like, what you would change and anything else.
https://soundcloud.com/jelfmusic/jelf-run
Hi Jelf,
Thanks for allowing a listen. I really liked your chorus. The choir like vocals and footstomp is reminiscent of Imagine Dragons. The first verse was hard to follow. The melody is kind of meandering and I had trouble following the flow.
I hope that helps!
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this is brilliant! I love the unconventional melodies in the verse. I just wish the song was a bit longer. I would've made some arrangement changes. and yes, it reminded me of ID too!
Aww thank's so much for the advice and comments guys!! A lot of people are saying it's reminiscent of Imagine Dragons so I guess that's a good thing!
Why don't you try with a publisher with this one?
Lots of potential.
Hey, great job i would love to hear the end result.
My opinion the verse top line isnt strong, the chorus is big, but you need a hook there. Also u use a Iv or a V chord to end the progression?