Hey guys! Like Dominik I have a new song :)
It's just a demo with a rough mix, would do u think about the song and the sound?
there will be variation on the topline too!
"Scream"
http://soundcloud.com/user141646/dan-bryer-scream-demo-3-0
great song, too...;)
think the sound is pretty powerful for a rough mix
respectively...
Hey Nico, I really like the chorus, and I have a suggestion if you don't mind :-) To me, the hook is the melody on "I just wanna make you scream" -- I think it would be better to start the chorus with that melody, then bring in the other melody ("Cuz all my dreams. etc"), then wrap it up with the "I just wanna make you scream;' line melody. If you just reverse those sections I think it'd be a great chorus :D
It sounds great , congratulations , great chorus.
Thanks guys!
George I'll try your advice !
What do u think about the production of the verses? I would something "original" by using weird sounds, but I don't know if it's sounds good
Love it Nico!!
How about using the traditional house hi-hatting (open-hat for every other 1/8) in chorus instead of that 1/16 closed hat thing? I think the chorus lacks some speed (not tempo necessarily, but the image) and power. Also, the vocals are a little vapid.
really good song, I like it. well done!
I like it so much, quite catchy :)
are you going to release it for yourself or submitting the track as demo to another artist ?
Quote from: Farooq on May 16, 2011, 08:36:41 PM
I like it so much, quite catchy :)
are you going to release it for yourself or submitting the track as demo to another artist ?
The song is going to be submit to another artist, I'm not a singer hahahha
This is an awesome song! Congrats!
Sorry I forgot my login from years ago, but I'm glad to be back.
http://snd.sc/lBsrwN
Here's a new version of the song! just a rough mix !
Quote from: maxmartin'sfan on June 20, 2011, 12:30:10 PM
http://snd.sc/lBsrwN
Here's a new version of the song! just a rough mix !
Woww , it sounds amazing!! , I love it! , specially the chorus is amazing!
Quote from: Raul_esp on June 20, 2011, 03:44:12 PM
Quote from: maxmartin'sfan on June 20, 2011, 12:30:10 PM
http://snd.sc/lBsrwN
Here's a new version of the song! just a rough mix !
Woww , it sounds amazing!! , I love it! , specially the chorus is amazing!
Thanks a lot!
I'm Looking for an english-speaking Female Singer for this song! someone to suggest?
think you did a great job in mixing....sounds pretty
modern soundwise even though I think that there's definately
some space for much catchier melodies and hooks...I mean it's
not really hitting on me immediately...don't know, it sounds
a little cheesy in a not good way...maybe that's just my opinion
and the singer is not really killing it also
Quote from: Dominik on June 21, 2011, 07:56:46 AM
think you did a great job in mixing....sounds pretty
modern soundwise even though I think that there's definately
some space for much catchier melodies and hooks...I mean it's
not really hitting on me immediately...don't know, it sounds
a little cheesy in a not good way...maybe that's just my opinion
and the singer is not really killing it also
The singer is just the songwriter haha he's not really a singer :D, I agree with u the melody could be catchier with more dynamic! Dominik would u like to try to change a bit the topline to make it catchier?
yes, i could give it a try...
pls send me the lyrics and the instrumental...
I got some time right now so maybe you could
just send it over to me
I'm sending you that right now
awesome ;)
It's sounding good Nico, I'm looking forward to the next update. Yes, I different singer could make a difference.
The New Version is more dynamic! Great Job Dominik!
thx my mate... couldn't do without the great backing track ;)
files are coming soon! uploading right now...
Hey Guys!
here's Dominik version for the song "Scream" ! What Do u Think?
http://soundcloud.com/popsoul/popsoul-scream-alternative
Written by (Dan Bryer/Nico/Dominik Kohl)
Produced by Popsoul
I'm so addicted to it! Good work!
Sounds great!!
really great!
http://soundcloud.com/popsoul/dominik-kohl-scream-demo-prod
here's the full version ! :D you can listen to the bridge !
thanks, it sounds great!
Quote from: maxmartin'sfan on August 28, 2011, 11:51:05 AM
http://soundcloud.com/popsoul/dominik-kohl-scream-demo-prod
here's the full version ! :D you can listen to the bridge !
I love it , it sounds very good.