new song (instrumental)

[melodicmoonlight]

https://www.dropbox.com/s/158htptr9ghk6ok/songinstrumental%20.mp3

so i'm posting a new song i made. started it a year ago and really finished it up over the past few months. it's just instrumental, and i was thinking it'd be cool to hear if anyone had any melody/lyrical ideas. i already have a full melody/vocals recorded, but I'm curious to see what someone else's interpretation could be.

enjoy!

[nznexus]

im impressed

[B Steady]

I'm sorry but what is this?

Sounds like you freestyled every part in this song. I can't see an arrangement, the mix is horrible.

Lol, some parts remind me of ABBA's Mamma Mia, other parts remind me of Britney Spears' How I Roll

[melodicmoonlight]

I'm sorry but what is this?

Sounds like you freestyled every part in this song. I can't see an arrangement, the mix is horrible.

Lol, some parts remind me of ABBA's Mamma Mia, other parts remind me of Britney Spears' How I Roll

well I use garageband, and i didn't mix it at all. does it need to be mixed? mix it for me then.

[B Steady]

It doesn't need to be mixed perfectly but the melodies are like 10 x as loud as the drums. And everything's so dry.

[nznexus]

hmmm.... of course it needs to be mixed

[B Steady]

hmmm.... of course it needs to be mixed

I meant he doesn't need to mix it for us