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Let me know what you think of my 2nd single 'Run'

Started by jelfmusic, May 08, 2016, 09:10:47 PM

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jelfmusic

Hey Guys

As Max and the disciples influence me so, so much and they influence all you guys, I really value your opinion. So I'd love to know what you think of my 2nd single :D :D :D

Let me know what you like, what you would change and anything else.

https://soundcloud.com/jelfmusic/jelf-run


The Fates

Hi Jelf,

Thanks for allowing a listen.  I really liked your chorus.  The choir like vocals and footstomp is reminiscent of Imagine Dragons.  The first verse was hard to follow. The melody is kind of meandering and I had trouble following the flow. 

I hope that helps!

x

B Steady

this is brilliant! I love the unconventional melodies in the verse. I just wish the song was a bit longer. I would've made some arrangement changes. and yes, it reminded me of ID too!
Vila i frid Dag

jelfmusic

Aww thank's so much for the advice and comments guys!! A lot of people are saying it's reminiscent of Imagine Dragons so I guess that's a good thing!

j.fco.morales

Why don't you try with a publisher with this one?

Lots of potential.


Mark

Hey,  great job i would love to hear the end result.
My opinion the verse top line isnt strong,  the chorus is big, but you need a hook there.  Also u use a Iv or a V chord to end the progression?