My First Music Forum And Song And Lyrics And Clip :)

[AmirMaor]

Hi,
My name is Amir from Tel-Aviv and I LOVE music!
I'm here to here your opinion about my music (good and bad) and hope to learn from it.

Here is my new song (and clip), First time i'm uploaded to youtube.

hope you like it

Lyrics:
All she said you and me
All she said meant to be
All she gave me reason to bealive
When she said she will never live

Where are you now
What are you doing to me
Where are you now

All she said hold me tiet
When we stay up all night
All she said trust in me
All I have Is what she said to me

Where are you now
What are you doing to me
Where are you now

The wind you feel I feel it to
The sky you see Is not just for you
We are on the same road Don't turn your head away
Maybe some day....

Where are you now
What are you doing to me
Where are you now

The song:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BUmkbv-v-vI

Tnx

[Jules]

Wrong category. 

[AmirMaor]

Songwriters > new songs

And If so, what is the right category here?

tnx

[B Steady]

Songwriters > new songs

And If so, what is the right category here?

tnx

THE Songwriters Max Martin & Co.
So your song would fit in this category: http://www.swedishsongs.de/smf/index.php?board=6.0

I'll give you some feedback later on!

[B Steady]

I really like the arrangement, your voice and the quality of your song. It's catchy and the chorus is very well done with the change of the chord progression and that "where are you noooow" part is really a great hook! The only thing I don't like is your accent but that's not your fault