"Scream" new song produced by me

[maxmartin'sfan]

Hey guys! Like Dominik I have a new song 

It's just a demo with a rough mix, would do u think about the song and the sound?
there will be variation on the topline too!

"Scream"
http://soundcloud.com/user141646/dan-bryer-scream-demo-3-0

[Dominik]

great song, too...

[Dominik]

think the sound is pretty powerful for a rough mix
respectively...

[georg_e]

 
               Hey Nico, I really like the chorus, and I have a suggestion if you don't mind :-)   To me, the hook is the melody on "I just wanna make you scream" -- I think it would be better to start the chorus with that melody, then bring in the other melody ("Cuz all my dreams. etc"), then wrap it up with the "I just wanna make you scream;' line melody. If you just reverse those sections I think it'd be a great chorus

[Raul_esp]

It sounds great , congratulations , great chorus.

[maxmartin'sfan]

Thanks guys!
George I'll try your advice !

What do u think about the production of the verses? I would something "original" by using weird sounds, but I don't know if it's sounds good

[Linda]

Love it Nico!!

[Crane]

How about using the traditional house hi-hatting (open-hat for every other 1/8) in chorus instead of that 1/16 closed hat thing? I think the chorus lacks some speed (not tempo necessarily, but the image) and power. Also, the vocals are a little vapid.

[Rebecca]

really good song, I like it. well done!

[Farooq]

I like it so much, quite catchy

are you going to release it for yourself or submitting the track as demo to another artist ?

[maxmartin'sfan]

I like it so much, quite catchy

are you going to release it for yourself or submitting the track as demo to another artist ?

The song is going to be submit to another artist, I'm not a singer hahahha

[awonip]

This is an awesome song! Congrats!

Sorry I forgot my login from years ago, but I'm glad to be back.

[maxmartin'sfan]

http://snd.sc/lBsrwN

Here's a new version of the song! just a rough mix !

[Raul_esp]

http://snd.sc/lBsrwN

Here's a new version of the song! just a rough mix !

Woww , it sounds amazing!! , I love it! , specially the chorus is amazing!

[maxmartin'sfan]

http://snd.sc/lBsrwN

Here's a new version of the song! just a rough mix !

Woww , it sounds amazing!! , I love it! , specially the chorus is amazing!

Thanks a lot!

I'm Looking for an english-speaking Female Singer for this song! someone to suggest?