Pop Song - What do you think about it? :)

[ck]

Hey Friends,

I just want to Show you a DEMO-Pop-Song, which I've written with a Songwriter from Jamaica Long Time ago.
The Singer is very Demo-ist and Not a Good Voice for it, but i Love the Message and want to Show you the Demo of it, which no One had a Listen to it and I've Sent it to noone,because it Nerds a Good Singer and i think that the Sound is nö more up-to-date:
http://snd.sc/YkM5V1

Thanks
CK

[B Steady]

actually a pretty good song but it needs - as you said - a better singer and some more modern sounds. especially the hihat is very 90s like haha! could've been used by denniz

all in all a good basis to make a hit out of it !