"Feel The Sun" - A song I'm working on. Any feedback? :)

[sand_bar]

I would love some feedback on this song I'm writing and producing. I still don't have a second verse yet. What would Max think? Hehe

http://picosong.com/Ja3N/

[B Steady]

very special! and I liked it from the very beginning. was only listening through phone speakers. now I decided to put on my studio headphones. and I still like it! a lot to be exact. can't name any details but I definitely feel some magic
very well arranged! and I also like the writing and the production, the overall build up.
favorite part: 1:46/47. these xylophonish drops. I don't know how to describe but you sure know what I mean. pure magic!
and I don't know what Max would think of this but in my opinion this song would actually fit the latest Adam and Abel records which Max was a big part of.
is there more of your music on the Internet? I'm addicted to this song!
and btw I'm actually known for being very critical. well done my man!

[sand_bar]

wow! blown away by your response.

i thought if i was writing pop songs i might as well come to the connoisseurs here to see what they thought

i do have a few other songs on soundcloud. curious what you think about those if you have any time. the production quality isn't as good on those i don't think.

https://soundcloud.com/sandbarsound cheers!