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Title: My music, need advice!
Post by: maxmartin'sfan on June 11, 2010, 01:25:38 AM
Hey Everybody !
I upload a new music on snowfish!
I need to know what you think ! be careful, it's not mixed and finished yet, just an "early" demo ! the piano doesn't sounds like enough natural! i'm a bad piano player ahah sorry   :)




http://snowfish.com/sound/10852/c/6025/
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Post by: Raul_esp on June 11, 2010, 01:49:30 AM
it sounds really nice , remind a bit to a roxette song  :D
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Post by: Izalightblue on June 11, 2010, 02:35:06 AM
I think it's very good, I liked it a lot, pretty song. I also think it reminds Roxette a bit.
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Post by: georg_e on June 11, 2010, 06:51:37 AM
                 Hey, I think it's a very attractive sound and track, nice colors to it, simple and clear: very good main piano melody over good chord changes, and lots of room for a vocal melody to be written over the track, and I thought it has a kind of visual video/film vibe. Your piano playing is fine!!  ;-)
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: maxmartin'sfan on June 11, 2010, 08:41:58 AM
 ;D ;D thanks!

George you are right ! i put a lot of room for a vocal part.. before my main problem when i wrote a music, was to put too much melody everywhere! impossible to a singer to put a melody on it ahah  ;D
and I love to have a visual video vibe on my music, I would like to become a movie composer, but in a few years
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: georg_e on June 11, 2010, 04:16:19 PM
Quote from: maxmartin'sfan on June 11, 2010, 08:41:58 AM
;D ;D thanks!

George you are right ! i put a lot of room for a vocal part.. before my main problem when i wrote a music, was to put too much melody everywhere! impossible to a singer to put a melody on it ahah  ;D
and I love to have a visual video vibe on my music, I would like to become a movie composer, but in a few years
Yes, I think the balance you have between that piano melody (it's really good) and the open parts is great.  I think because I've been listening alot lately to the instrumental track for "Mirror's Edge", ("Still Alive" ) your track reminds me of  the balance they have between very strong piano melody and then the vocal melody, which is really different from their piano melody, so it's like they have two melody things going on.
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: Rebecca on June 12, 2010, 12:42:18 PM
really really nice, sounds really pretty. Also it does sound a bit like Roxette too.
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: maxmartin'sfan on June 12, 2010, 04:52:35 PM
yeaa I sounds like roxette ! nice start ahah  ;D
Now I need to find a someone who can write a pop song and a girl to sing on this music
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Post by: Feelgoodlies on June 12, 2010, 09:27:44 PM
Nice work, but of course we need the full thing to judge properly!
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: maxmartin'sfan on June 13, 2010, 01:23:58 PM
here's a new sound

my 1st try with an electric guitar, the guitar doesn't sounds like very good and the bass is overmixed, but I can't change it for the moment !


http://snowfish.com/sound/10995/c/6025/


and a movie score

http://snowfish.com/sound/11000/c/6025/
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Post by: Izalightblue on June 13, 2010, 11:02:39 PM
Cool music! I like it!! Keep up with your good work, Nico! ;)
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Post by: maxmartin'sfan on June 14, 2010, 12:06:27 AM
thanks iza!
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Post by: Raul_esp on June 14, 2010, 12:44:59 AM
woww , it's really good! , the melodies are great , very good production. great work, i would love see you working with max  ;D ,
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: maxmartin'sfan on June 14, 2010, 12:55:49 AM
Quote from: Raul_esp on June 14, 2010, 12:44:59 AM
woww , it's really good! , the melodies are great , very good production. great work, i would love see you working with max  ;D ,

ahah thanks  ;)

I wish to work once with one of the cheiron team!! just to learn some tips !  ;D ;D
I"m still looking for an internship in sweden for the end of the year héhé

My internship in USA was cancelled, but I never give up héhé
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: Rebecca on June 16, 2010, 12:16:43 PM
That's a shame Nico, but yes, keep up your good work

I love the movie score, it's excellent.
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: maxmartin'sfan on August 25, 2010, 07:32:53 PM
yo everybody!

I have new sounds and i would like to know what u think about them!

http://snowfish.com/popsoul

The first sound is "Wait 4 me" it sounds like a bit like a timbaland song

The second "Sweet Candy" is a balad, as u can see I'm a bad key player ahah and I have to work more the verse !

The last " Ghetto Superstar" is an Pop/Rnb sound

Thanks !
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Post by: Izalightblue on August 25, 2010, 07:48:29 PM
Nico!!! Very nice music!! Sweet Candy sounds like it was a Ryan Tedder song, while the other two for me sound like a mix of RedOne, Timbaland and kind of Cheiron!!! Good job!!! ;) I wish you worked with a big producer, you deserve it!  ;D.
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Post by: georg_e on August 25, 2010, 08:40:48 PM

   Darn.....for some reason, none of the songs will play for me when i hit the arrow.....I'll try again later, cuz I liked your other stuff! ;-)
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: Raul_esp on August 25, 2010, 11:26:41 PM
Woww , it was really good , very profesional , great melodies , you need a voice for these songs.
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: Alex Martin on August 25, 2010, 11:33:23 PM
The New Max Martin is HERE!!!!!  :D
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: maxmartin'sfan on August 26, 2010, 01:00:07 AM
 ;D Thanks Everybody !

I'm working with a young swedish singer she has a wonderful voice, but she'll need a lot of work before to write a hit! she's only 16!

I can't write the voice melody or lyrics... impossible for me haha



Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: Raul_esp on August 26, 2010, 02:27:37 AM
Quote from: maxmartin'sfan on August 26, 2010, 01:00:07 AM
;D Thanks Everybody !

I'm working with a young swedish singer she has a wonderful voice, but she'll need a lot of work before to write a hit! she's only 16!

I can't write the voice melody or lyrics... impossible for me haha





She's your britney!  ;D , maybe someone of the forum can write good vocals melodies and lyrics.
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Post by: georg_e on August 26, 2010, 02:29:37 AM

          Ah, works now........my fave definitely "Ghetto Superstar":   that's hot!!!!
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: maxmartin'sfan on August 26, 2010, 02:39:04 AM
Thanksssssssssssssssss!

yes she's my Britney! who knows?  ahaha
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Post by: JackSnr on August 26, 2010, 07:33:55 AM
Wow Nico, great songs. Very professional!  ;D
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: maxmartin'sfan on September 17, 2010, 02:08:33 AM
Hey everybody!
I'm working with a songwriter of our forum ! listen to our 1st song!


http://snowfish.com/sound/22119/c/6025/

Party Girl
tell me what u think!
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: Raul_esp on September 17, 2010, 03:27:07 AM
Quote from: maxmartin'sfan on September 17, 2010, 02:08:33 AM
Hey everybody!
I'm working with a songwriter of our forum ! listen to our 1st song!


http://snowfish.com/sound/22119/c/6025/

Party Girl
tell me what u think!

Great , very catchy! , it sounds very Max/Dr luke .
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: Alex Martin on September 17, 2010, 09:30:25 AM
A worldwide hit for sure  :D
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: Rebecca on September 17, 2010, 01:18:28 PM
It's great Nico! I really like it, but maybe it could be a bit faster and dancier. but well done.
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: maxmartin'sfan on September 17, 2010, 02:43:08 PM
http://snowfish.com/sound/22122/c/6025/

with a better mix!
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: maxmartin'sfan on October 25, 2010, 09:40:27 PM
http://snowfish.com/sound/22536/c/6025/

Hey Guys !  I need feedback on my new song! "Zombie" co written with a guy from the Forum ! that's just a demo

;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: Raul_esp on October 25, 2010, 09:53:26 PM
Quote from: maxmartin'sfan on October 25, 2010, 09:40:27 PM
http://snowfish.com/sound/22536/c/6025/

Hey Guys !  I need feedback on my new song! "Zombie" co written with a guy from the Forum ! that's just a demo

;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D

Wowww , Great!! , the song is AMAZING , very Maxish , the chorus is amazing , and the zombie part very funny.

I'm surprised with this song , it's maybe your best work , the song sounds very fresh and profesional, it has potencial of hit , i need listen the full thing  :D
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: maxmartin'sfan on October 25, 2010, 10:05:06 PM
yeaa thanks!

All the Good ideas come from Dan, the guy who did the lyrics and topline, I Just did the Music and The sound production! I'm learning a lot with him! he did an amazing work on my sound!
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: Raul_esp on October 25, 2010, 10:11:46 PM
Quote from: maxmartin'sfan on October 25, 2010, 10:05:06 PM
yeaa thanks!

All the Good ideas come from Dan, the guy who did the lyrics and topline, I Just did the Music and The sound production! I'm learning a lot with him! he did an amazing work on my sound!

The production is great too , guys , you have created a hit!  ;D
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Post by: Izalightblue on October 25, 2010, 11:50:21 PM
It's a mix of a RedOne and a Max song. ;)
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Post by: JackSnr on October 26, 2010, 01:55:50 AM
Wow, awesome song. The chorus is amazing. Very Max-ish indeed. What program do you use? I was wondering how you get that sound at 1:00. Max and Luke always have something like that before the chorus. Such a cool sound!
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Post by: maxmartin'sfan on October 26, 2010, 02:09:17 AM
http://www.popmusic.dk/hitkit-us.html

For all the Drums sound I'm using this drum kit!

jack the sound u mean is the FX before the Chorus?
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Post by: OverPop on October 26, 2010, 04:30:50 AM
Sounds cool  :) but the verse is almost the same as the chorus in Telephone (Gaga)   ;)
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: JackSnr on October 27, 2010, 08:56:26 AM
Quote from: maxmartin'sfan on October 26, 2010, 02:09:17 AM
http://www.popmusic.dk/hitkit-us.html

For all the Drums sound I'm using this drum kit!

jack the sound u mean is the FX before the Chorus?

Yeah, just before the chorus. Did you use Pro Tools?
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Post by: Rebecca on October 27, 2010, 12:05:59 PM
oh no, somehow the link for Zombie doesn't work for me, could you put the link up again? Thanks
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: maxmartin'sfan on October 27, 2010, 01:36:56 PM
I use protools for the editing! but for the sound production I use cubase 5, with différent VST instruments.
The sound before the chorus is just a FX sound from a sound Bank loool, but u can create this kind of sound with a virtual synth!


Rebecca I'll upload the song again in a few days, when I'll have a better sound !
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: JackSnr on October 28, 2010, 02:39:35 AM
Quote from: maxmartin'sfan on October 27, 2010, 01:36:56 PM
I use protools for the editing! but for the sound production I use cubase 5, with différent VST instruments.
The sound before the chorus is just a FX sound from a sound Bank loool, but u can create this kind of sound with a virtual synth!


Rebecca I'll upload the song again in a few days, when I'll have a better sound !

THANK YOU!
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: maxmartin'sfan on October 30, 2010, 12:36:15 AM
http://snowfish.com/sound/22556/c/6025/

what do u think about the new sound? it's just a rough demo for the moment!
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Post by: Raul_esp on October 30, 2010, 12:47:30 AM
Quote from: maxmartin'sfan on October 30, 2010, 12:36:15 AM
http://snowfish.com/sound/22556/c/6025/

what do u think about the new sound? it's just a rough demo for the moment!
I think there is so much autotune in the verses , but it goes on sounding amazing.
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: maxmartin'sfan on October 30, 2010, 12:52:08 AM
 ;D ;D ;D I'm agree with you, but the guy who sing is not really a singer! so it's better with autotune! it's just a demo ! the song will be give to a real singer later haha  ;D
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: Raul_esp on October 30, 2010, 01:19:35 AM
Quote from: maxmartin'sfan on October 30, 2010, 12:52:08 AM
;D ;D ;D I'm agree with you, but the guy who sing is not really a singer! so it's better with autotune! it's just a demo ! the song will be give to a real singer later haha  ;D

Maybe to Taio cruz  ;D
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: maxmartin'sfan on October 30, 2010, 01:34:43 AM
Quote from: Raul_esp on October 30, 2010, 01:19:35 AM
Quote from: maxmartin'sfan on October 30, 2010, 12:52:08 AM
;D ;D ;D I'm agree with you, but the guy who sing is not really a singer! so it's better with autotune! it's just a demo ! the song will be give to a real singer later haha  ;D

Maybe to Taio cruz  ;D

Who knows?  ;D  I know this song has a good potential!  Now My job is made a good sound! it's really hard
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: Raul_esp on October 30, 2010, 01:47:10 AM
Quote from: maxmartin'sfan on October 30, 2010, 01:34:43 AM
Quote from: Raul_esp on October 30, 2010, 01:19:35 AM
Quote from: maxmartin'sfan on October 30, 2010, 12:52:08 AM
;D ;D ;D I'm agree with you, but the guy who sing is not really a singer! so it's better with autotune! it's just a demo ! the song will be give to a real singer later haha  ;D

Maybe to Taio cruz  ;D

Who knows?  ;D  I know this song has a good potential!  Now My job is made a good sound! it's really hard

Yeah , this song has a great potencial for a pop artist in this moment , i havent heard the whole song but a great midle 8 in the end would do the song perfect .
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: maxmartin'sfan on October 30, 2010, 08:40:19 PM
Heyhey!
Here's the final sound!what do u think?

http://snowfish.com/sound/22558/c/6025/
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: JackSnr on October 30, 2010, 11:41:31 PM
Heyhey! It's great! I hope Usher sings it lol. Perfect pop record.
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Post by: Rebecca on October 30, 2010, 11:44:43 PM
I think it's great too Nico. although it's a little bit repetitive with so many Zombie's. I think it would be good for Adam Lambert!
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: maxmartin'sfan on October 30, 2010, 11:53:18 PM
Thanks !!  :D :D

I've a question, do you think there are to much sound on my production or not?
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Post by: Raul_esp on October 31, 2010, 12:41:22 AM
The final song is amazing  , better than so much proffesional productions, it's perfect for Taio or Usher , and the sound is perfect.
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Post by: maxmartin'sfan on February 18, 2011, 02:15:29 PM
Hey Guys!

I have finally my 1st demo with a young swedish singer ! "Zombie"

http://soundcloud.com/user141646/thelma-lebert-zombie-demo-8-2

just the lead vocal was record!  and all the voice track are going to be record again! tell me what do u think ! :p
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: Raul_esp on February 18, 2011, 05:23:48 PM
Quote from: maxmartin'sfan on February 18, 2011, 02:15:29 PM
Hey Guys!

I have finally my 1st demo with a young swedish singer ! "Zombie"

http://soundcloud.com/user141646/thelma-lebert-zombie-demo-8-2

just the lead vocal was record!  and all the voice track are going to be record again! tell me what do u think ! :p
It's really amazing!! , I love it! , it's a very professional work , great production and great vocals! , great work!
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: maxmartin'sfan on March 31, 2011, 01:15:32 AM
Hey everybody!
I have a new version of my song "Party Girl" written with Dan Bryer!

I need to know what do u think about the sound! I just need to find a great female singer!

http://soundcloud.com/user141646/dan-bryer-party-girl-on


Thanks
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: Raul_esp on March 31, 2011, 01:50:04 AM
Quote from: maxmartin'sfan on March 31, 2011, 01:15:32 AM
Hey everybody!
I have a new version of my song "Party Girl" written with Dan Bryer!

I need to know what do u think about the sound! I just need to find a great female singer!

http://soundcloud.com/user141646/dan-bryer-party-girl-on


Thanks


Great! , it has a current Max-Luke sound!
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: maxmartin'sfan on March 31, 2011, 10:19:09 AM
Thanks Raul!
  Yes it sounds a bit like a Max-Luke song, but I would like to have the same guitar quality sound ! And the same singer looool
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: Dominik on March 31, 2011, 10:29:35 AM
hey, it has a pretty cool mood and melodies. production sounds good, too.
in my opinion the verses are much better than the chorus. but with a great
singer on it this could be a very good song
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: Dominik on March 31, 2011, 10:31:24 AM
will you collab on a co-write?? ;)
Title: Re: My music, need advice!
Post by: maxmartin'sfan on March 31, 2011, 12:37:46 PM
Hey Dominik!

A collaboration could be great! I,m looking for songwriters! Can u send one or two of your song by mail? Like carousel, I'm on my iphone and i can't here the song on the website!

nicolas.vieille[a]gmail.com

See ya
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Post by: Rebecca on April 03, 2011, 01:09:17 AM
both songs are great Nico, well done.