Michael Rodion - R-Boyz

[Michael Rodion]

Another classic songs created by Michael Rodion under the "artist "name 'R-Boyz'!

-R-Boyz - Through Over Space
http://www.4shared.com/rar/5k-dh_iDba/R-Boyz_-_Through_Over_Space.html

-R-Boyz -Take The Way Up
http://www.4shared.com/rar/z5VjlBkEba/R-Boyz_-_Take_The_Way_Up.html?

-R - Boyz - ???Unknown???
https://soundcloud.com/michaelrodion/r-boyz-1

-R-Boyz -Dont Get Followed (Bam Bam Bam)
https://soundcloud.com/michaelrodion/r-boyz-dont-get-followed-bam-bam-bam

[B Steady]

I was only listening to Don't Get Followed. With due respect to your Cheiron imitations: don't you hear that the melodies and chords you're using don't fit together?

[ShockdioN]

Hew?

[B Steady]

The solution is as obvious as the disorder in your head.

[Michael Rodion]

maaf...

translate
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another one I want to show to you:

https://soundcloud.com/michaelrodion/10-r-boyz-take-me-up

good?

[Michael Rodion]

I was only listening to Don't Get Followed. With due respect to your Cheiron imitations: don't you hear that the melodies and chords you're using don't fit together?

in Which Part of the song? I'm going to make improvements on it

[AlexanderLaBrea]

What he means is that (and it's throughout the whole song) it's dissonant. As he said, the chords and the notes in the melodies doesn't fit together. It kinda sounds like there is two different songs playing at the same time, in different keys. The idea is, if you have a song that is, let's say in A minor, having a melody that is based around a C# note is kind of a bad idea. Notes of choice are primarily the root, third and fifth. Then seventh and so forth. You seemed to hit a lot of the "definately a no no"-notes if you will.
I actually paused like half a minute in to see if I didn't have another song playing in the background. If you fix that though, you clearly have found some of the signature sounds and production ideas of theirs. 

[Michael Rodion]

I understand ...